Being a buttery brother and all, I feel like I should be honest about this one.
The goal of joining the Legion is, after all to evolve as an artist.

And I must say that I don't like this photograph at all.
I assume you tried to capture a feeling with this image more than anything else.
Like when you take your first gulp on a hot summer day and goes 'Aaah'.
In that case, you didn't get that.
It doesn't portray the freshness or anything about it at all, exept for the fact that there's some brown liquid in a coke bottle in the picture.

The colors are not good for this picture, it just makes the whole thing look luke warm and flat.

You should've gone for sharper, darker colors , shot the drink while being poured into a glass with something coca cola-ish in the background.
Say a beach or something.

Sorry if I was being too harsh here but I felt like I had to say something (hopefully constructive) about this.

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Yea you where a little harsh, But you're right The photo needs improving but its my first time photograping something. And thanks for the critique next time ill spend more time planning on what to shoot...

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No prob, I do that a lot of the time too. I take a photo and when I examine it later I see about 20 things that I could've done better.
And it's not so much WHAT you shoot, but HOW you shoot it.
Properly done, something really simple can make an epic photo.

But I look forward to seeing more photography from you.
It's always great fun when you can notice improvement in a person.


Until we meet again

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Hmmm well, I would also say that dark cola is more refreshing but this picture is quite unusual as for coca's portraits. And If you would do another one in the same theme it could be very interesting. Like making a shoot of a whole bottle bathing in intense sunlight or something.

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liquid heaven?

i think so.

good picture

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That is a really odd looking bottle. O_o

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Is that...a glass bottle?!? Dear lord, I never see those anymore. But they make the coke taste better than can.

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I love this picture, if only for the little words beneath the logo "world of coca-cola".

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Great!The glow in the background and like the coke is all so relaxing.

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